Date: April 20, 2007
School: New London High School
Town: New London
Slug: "Tropical Water Coral Research"
Status: Re-Submit
Length: 45

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OVERALL: Nice job writing into the interview and adding a voiceover. There is a shot in the middle with no voiceover. What are the coral used for? Is this the only high school that is doing this? Is this a pilot program or in conjunction with Mystic Aquarium or another partner? Stick to a focus and expand. The story is 5 seconds short. The story needs to be 50 seconds to fit in our broadcast schedule.

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Date: March 1, 2007
School: New London High School
Town: New London