Date Posted: April 20, 2007
School: East Granby High
Slug: Hat Day
DELIVERY: Good job. Clear and delivered at a good
INTERVIEWS: Good sound bites and good sources. Good angels for the
ORIGINALITY: Good story choices.
VIDEO: There wasn't a reason for the camera movement in the
story. Make sure there is a specific reason to do it. The shots were mostly
medium. You needed to have some tight shots of a hat or someone donating their
money. The first interview was against a white wall and that made the face
appear to have shadows. Either shoot with a light or a different
AUDIO: Pretty good. Good microphone
EDITING: There was a jump cut going into the second interview.
Cover that with b-roll.
OVERALL: Good job. Next time work on getting more
b-roll and better mix of tight, medium and wide shots. That will help with the
editing and flow of the story overall.